All Comments on 'Stranded Ch. 03'

I am three years too late.. thank you

HELLO, I ABSOLUTELY LOVED YOUR STORY, READ THE 3 CHAPTERS HERE ONLINE. MADE ME BREAK INTO A SWEAT, WOW. PLEASE, PLEASE WRITE MORE STORIES. I WILL WATCH FOR YOUR WORK ONLINE......

oh wow you know you excel at writing erotica dude 5/5 stars

most male writers just write trash or either brag but you i cant believe this is your first dude

these are some of your lines which i really adored in this one:-

"And now she kept on sucking on his erect member thus keeping him aroused. She did not want to let go of him and of the feeling that had overtaken her body and soul"

"she enjoyed the sensation of grinding her clit on his pelvic bone."

"She wanted to feel him grow within her and she set her body to the task by flexing her inner muscles in an attempt to squeeze him back to life."

""Jackie... Hhhhhhh! I think I love you HHHHH!" talk abt the timing

what i loved most is that both the characters have their moments of embarassment ,nervousness,cuteness,lust,love ,they both feel oberwhelmed especially when they both experience the best climax of their lives

jeremy is big yet soft confident yet shy

jackie is strong yet delicate insatiable yet easily embarrassed

they are fucking perfect in their sweet little world they made for each other

please write more

please go for publishing you have got everything needed in a brilliant novelist

every word every line all details all emotions perfectly raptured and too in erotica

every single min i read it was worth it

i wish i was here when you posted these for us