by skinnypom
Why didn't he simply slap the bitch silly, get dressed, take the car and leave? When your characters are stupid, your story is stupid.
It was a cute, short story. I liked it. It could have been a bit more detailed and longer, but only because it drew me in and got me curious. You can tell it's a good story by the way the trolls react.
Good grief...if he would of slapped her he would never had such a great time.
.you are the stupid one...
Great story, direct and to the point, and yet very effective in its evocation of the situation! Thank you!
I'd luv to be in that situation, doubly so if she is a SSBBW, with a sweet ass crack for me to tongue