All Comments on 'Stranded in the Rain'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Well that was stupid

Why didn't he simply slap the bitch silly, get dressed, take the car and leave? When your characters are stupid, your story is stupid.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Fun Story

It was a cute, short story. I liked it. It could have been a bit more detailed and longer, but only because it drew me in and got me curious. You can tell it's a good story by the way the trolls react.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
response to that was stupid...

Good grief...if he would of slapped her he would never had such a great time.

.you are the stupid one...

gemlesgrossgemlesgrossover 9 years ago
Great arousing story

Great story, direct and to the point, and yet very effective in its evocation of the situation! Thank you!

zazrix9zazrix9about 6 years ago
OMG

I'd luv to be in that situation, doubly so if she is a SSBBW, with a sweet ass crack for me to tongue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I want more of this. Great story. Please continue it soon.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Come on boys, fat women need lovin too!

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