All Comments on 'Strange Bedfellows Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Sweet Mother of God!

I love your work tender mindholes, really I do. This could probably shape up to be one of the best stories i have ever read and i am very much hoping you intend to continue it.

FatFemPinUpFatFemPinUpover 12 years ago
Yes!

I love this story sigh*** I love the confusion in May and her partner and how they both seem to submit to each other at different times without it being overdone! The story is actually BELIEVABLE which makes it all the more orgasmic....keep writing, I'm loving it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Keep going man this series holds a lot of promise.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
great

one of my favorites id love to read a part 3

the_nickmanthe_nickmanabout 12 years ago

Very nice, a part 3 (and4,5,6,7....) would be very awesome!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Top notch work

Wow!! Amazing work. Just amazing!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
More...... please

The previous comments pretty much cover the bases, great read !

pornbookpornbookover 11 years ago
wow, just wow

this is a could story to continue, really like the dynamic between them

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Would love to see a CH.3

astrobotastrobotabout 11 years ago

Please make this a series!

SWIM21SWIM21about 11 years ago
Don't leave us hanging!

You've got to tell us how it ends up for them! I can totally see them falling in love at this point. Please write a conclusion to this awesome story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Frig me

How intense is this, I need a conclusion please don't leave my mind wondering. Listening to James Blake " Retrograde" on repeat, perfect soundtrack to this story. Pokadot

nene22nene22about 10 years ago
There has to be a chapter 3

This story is too good for just 2 chapters. I would love to explore this relationship further. You are a very good writer in bad hands I would never have believed Ethan and may would hook up. I have so many questions, like was Ethan the first guy may has ever slept with and does she prefer anal over vaginal? Please continue this story the subject is really fascinating and is not thourgly explored on this site so it would be great to hear more. Thank you in advance

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Meh

Insulting and offensive. Lowest possible score.

tendermindholestendermindholesover 9 years agoAuthor
Ah, the anonymous-- why do when you can whine?

Wow, y'all have a lot of time on your hands. Feel free to report the story too.

If I wasn't so busy doing actual activism (you know, off the Internet?), or blogging on intersectionality, I might get around to writing a sequel to this.

I think I might do one though, I do appreciate the hypocrisy of call out culture. I might even throw in the hypocrisy of staid gender roles and abuse in the lesbian community-- and maybe throw in a TERF or two, just for funsies.

AmbisinisterAmbisinisterabout 9 years ago
Love the story direction

Also love how you seem to encourage the real blind haters to explode out of the woodwork.

Its a story about two friends finding physical comfort. It could just as easily be two hetero men or women experimenting with each other, that wouldn't seem to cause such a response. But let a lesbian experiment with hetero sex.....OMG. She's a traitor to the cause! The author must be vilified and tied to a stake! This would never happen in real life!!!

Attention all. This is fiction. And let me tell you boys and girls(or whatever gender you currently identify with), real life is absolutely fucking stranger than fiction!

So get over yourselves. If you don't like it, read something else. Don't attack an author who is simply exercising his write to free speech.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Part 3?

jsh1138jsh1138over 2 years ago

Please write another one of these

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Wonderful. Stretching the imagination and hopes.

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