by tendermindholes
I love your work tender mindholes, really I do. This could probably shape up to be one of the best stories i have ever read and i am very much hoping you intend to continue it.
I love this story sigh*** I love the confusion in May and her partner and how they both seem to submit to each other at different times without it being overdone! The story is actually BELIEVABLE which makes it all the more orgasmic....keep writing, I'm loving it!
The previous comments pretty much cover the bases, great read !
this is a could story to continue, really like the dynamic between them
You've got to tell us how it ends up for them! I can totally see them falling in love at this point. Please write a conclusion to this awesome story.
How intense is this, I need a conclusion please don't leave my mind wondering. Listening to James Blake " Retrograde" on repeat, perfect soundtrack to this story. Pokadot
This story is too good for just 2 chapters. I would love to explore this relationship further. You are a very good writer in bad hands I would never have believed Ethan and may would hook up. I have so many questions, like was Ethan the first guy may has ever slept with and does she prefer anal over vaginal? Please continue this story the subject is really fascinating and is not thourgly explored on this site so it would be great to hear more. Thank you in advance
Wow, y'all have a lot of time on your hands. Feel free to report the story too.
If I wasn't so busy doing actual activism (you know, off the Internet?), or blogging on intersectionality, I might get around to writing a sequel to this.
I think I might do one though, I do appreciate the hypocrisy of call out culture. I might even throw in the hypocrisy of staid gender roles and abuse in the lesbian community-- and maybe throw in a TERF or two, just for funsies.
Also love how you seem to encourage the real blind haters to explode out of the woodwork.
Its a story about two friends finding physical comfort. It could just as easily be two hetero men or women experimenting with each other, that wouldn't seem to cause such a response. But let a lesbian experiment with hetero sex.....OMG. She's a traitor to the cause! The author must be vilified and tied to a stake! This would never happen in real life!!!
Attention all. This is fiction. And let me tell you boys and girls(or whatever gender you currently identify with), real life is absolutely fucking stranger than fiction!
So get over yourselves. If you don't like it, read something else. Don't attack an author who is simply exercising his write to free speech.