by matthellman
No bad for a first timer. You do need to be more careful with your use of pronouns - she vs. her for example. I look forward to your next installment.
Good story nice descriptions. realistic situation of friends helping each other out and taking next step. keep writing you have very good potential.
Lovely start. It'll be interesting to see where you go from here. But for a first effort it was extremely well done. I'll look for more.
This is a fine story, without qualification. Looking forward to your next.
Yes your story got me hard. Your story is what two buddies should do for each other, I wish I had a friend that would let me jack off with him and even better yet go down on my man meat and suck it drink my cum.
Yes I liked a lot your story I hope that some of it is based on a real example on your life or a friend that you know / knew.
I am almost always horny and think how good great it would be for a "straight" man, teenage boy, widowed man, older man even real old man to suck my c*ck, da-n
I need it so freaking b ad my pecker wants to b e sucked soooo much.