by Anhyvar
Way hot, hot, hot story! I totally didn't see the twist coming at the end. Well done!
Very well put together. Excellent story line and superbly delivered. I like your creative descriptions and psychological insights. All in all an excellent piece. Thanks.
I did not give you a bad mark but neither did I read the last two pages. A big load of BS.
I honestly thought the Priest was going to turn into the stranger from the movies. But I loved your twist.
I felt her pulsing as the" Priest" continued to pleasure her by tormenting her.
Thanks Don
The story went from kind of fascinating to pure dogshit in the final part
Wow…what a sexual journey…I thought it was the cinema stranger…again!?
Riveting!