All Comments on 'Stranger in the Dark Ch. 02'

by Anhyvar

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GoodyGoodyTwoShoesGoodyGoodyTwoShoesabout 13 years ago
wow!

Way hot, hot, hot story! I totally didn't see the twist coming at the end. Well done!

nikkisnikkisover 12 years ago
Excellent

Very well put together. Excellent story line and superbly delivered. I like your creative descriptions and psychological insights. All in all an excellent piece. Thanks.

BfreetorunBfreetorunover 11 years ago
Fuck this nonsense...

I did not give you a bad mark but neither did I read the last two pages. A big load of BS.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Loved it.

I honestly thought the Priest was going to turn into the stranger from the movies. But I loved your twist.

I felt her pulsing as the" Priest" continued to pleasure her by tormenting her.

Thanks Don

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Outstanding

THAT WAS GOOD

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

The story went from kind of fascinating to pure dogshit in the final part

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Absolute Rubbish.

Beejay3Beejay3over 1 year ago

Wow…what a sexual journey…I thought it was the cinema stranger…again!?

Riveting!

AnnalovesitAnnalovesit10 months ago

What a lovely husband, just what every wife wants.

pe2quodpe2quod4 months ago

Intensely sexual !!! Well written !@!

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