All Comments on 'Strangers on a Train'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Wow!

Sexy, sexy story! Well done! Very erotic!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Great story and storytelling

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
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It's a fantasy - but for me the unrealistic aspect that none of the other passengers packed in the train around them reacts to smells and movements of their actions detracts too much for me to get really excited - but that is maybe more me than the author so I didn't register my 3 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Nice story

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