All Comments on 'Strangers on a Train'

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laplappapillonlaplappapillonover 14 years ago
paint it black

I travelled the London underground system every day for 2 years.

If you are a people watcher like myself, you always have in your mind the last person you happened to be watching when the lights went out on the Piccadilly Line.

Invariably in my case, that would have been a woman and occasionally I would have managed, by then, to score a bit of idle flirting.

The sudden blackness is quite exciting and adrenalin charged...The fantasy of approaching the object of my attention often crossed my mind, but I never found the courage to do it. You filled that little gap perfectly, Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Loved it!! 5 stars!

Not only the story is great, the ending is perfect too! But on the downside, I think you have spent a bit too long on the introduction. Nevertheless, I gave it a five stars rating!!

Haphaestion2004Haphaestion2004over 9 years ago
Sooo hot !!

I have now read all your stories - when will there be more plllzzz !!!

I loved this one, and it made me wonder what would be my reaction to being f...d in the tube during a power faillure (or whatever). I would be terrified that the lights would come on and there I would be, in the middle of an orgasm or without underwear ... gosh it doesn't bear thinking about ...

However - I do realize that doing it under these circumstances only makes it more exciting !!

It did cross my mind that poor Lucy was having sex NOT with the hot guy she was fancying, but with a dirty old man that had already spotted her on the train and was taking advantage of the situation !! OMG how bad that would've been, poor girl ! UUURRRGGHH !! ><

curiouscarolecuriouscaroleover 8 years ago

A very nice fantasy with a wicked twist, who was it?

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