All Comments on 'Strapped Into the Harness'

Well, it was still a little sadistic here, but I follow you as an author and like your over the edge pushing - totally felt like a vengeance vibe going on there! My favorite line was: "He stepped out of his jeans, still pooled at his ankles, and pushed them out of the way with one foot." One foot - not two feet - one foot. This tickled me. Lol. What an interesting Catch 22!

Blazing hot scene with insight into the characters we've been reading about. I loved the predicament he put her in, and everything after "Are you still green?" was just blindingly hot sex! Keep writing!

As for the one foot: I like to be detailed. 😉 My readers tell me the details help to put them in the moment, so to speak. Also, to the extent any of my writing is autobiographical, I try to stay close to the facts.

As for the background story of the characters: I've been told my male character is a mean prick, so I hoped to explain his motivations and defend him in this one. I promise you my D is NOT a prick. Not sadistic, not vengeful...just does his best to meet my needs! 😘

This was really top-of-the-tree stuff, CalypsoInPhilly -- one of the best this year!

Thank you for sharing, well done, and please have five big shiny stars from me.

Didn't you read the story? She is bringing him along, she introduced him to D/s and he is giving her what she needs and wants. Anonymous needs to actually read the entire story.

While some particulars aren't my thing, the way you put it all together makes it erotic for me. You gave us a solid base to understand their dynamic, then you drizzled consent and care throughout. For me, those elements are fundamental to enjoying a more challenging scene. That is what keeps your dom from coming across as mean pick and you fully succeeded here.

It is critical for authors to understand that readers know only what you tell and show to us. We then interpret that info based on our own experiences and knowledge. We don't have the background and depth about a person, real or fictional, that the author has. We interpret a story or character diffently than the author intended when the author doesn't give us the necessary information. Actions, emotions, motivations, the subtle differences created by the choice of one word over another are all critical. You put it all together very well on this piece.

This was a wonderfully well-written story. There are elements of it that would be my thing, but the way it is written it is erotic. The Dom may seem mean, but he is observing her and does check with her even if she does not respond. For someone, she is bringing along into the lifestyle although not all what I like he is certainly doing quite well. A man who is becoming dominant for her is learning all the right things and has quite the imagination in how he orchestrates their session. Very well done. 5 stars for sure

Well written, hot story.

Very very well written. I loved the aftercare at the end

What address do you use for incoming legal documents?

I don't usually like sadistic predicament stories, but the way you contextualized it a part of a loving and consensual relationship the brings pleasure through pain made it work for me. Intensely hot, with vivid descriptions of sexual pleasure. Great work.

Really neat story!

Absolutely perfect