by Libertine
Like most writers, you would be well served to have a second reader.
Use of a language? Writing skills?? "Bah" !!!!!!!!
I voted 4 stars although there were many things that should have knocked the vote down.... Misspellings & grammer issues.
Plus, a mother would never have a conversation detailing her sex experiences for her daughter.
The exhibitionist part was arousing I will admit but instructions are usually unnecessary...
The closed peach was dumb 'cuz an exhibitionist would open it up & allow exploration of her slit.