All Comments on 'Strawberries, Marianne Shows Off'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
cheery had been pooped?

Like most writers, you would be well served to have a second reader.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
What the hell do you expect from illiterate foreigner ??

Use of a language? Writing skills?? "Bah" !!!!!!!!

OseekerOseeker8 months ago

I voted 4 stars although there were many things that should have knocked the vote down.... Misspellings & grammer issues.

Plus, a mother would never have a conversation detailing her sex experiences for her daughter.

The exhibitionist part was arousing I will admit but instructions are usually unnecessary...

The closed peach was dumb 'cuz an exhibitionist would open it up & allow exploration of her slit.

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