All Comments on 'Strip Hearts Ch. 04'

Four chapters and no action yet. What are you a nun or something like it? Let us get this thing heated up or stop now.

I really like where this story seems to be going, but it reminds me of stop and go traffic...you just get started, then STOP...START...STOP! Loses something a bit this way!

Seems like a nice build up, but learn the difference between the two.

*sigh* lol. like I said, I didn't realize they would be published so far apart... it is my first story after all. I've submitted edits to put them all close together, but it looks like the editors haven't gotten around to it...

you might as well wait before reading =P

I'd rather you go a few days between each part and put 2-3 pages in each. You just get started and its over.

long extended sex requires buildup, start and stops, each time a new beginning. I like this.