All Comments on 'Strip Hearts Ch. 06'

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camperguy123camperguy123almost 10 years ago
Great job of turning story .

Good too see that you took control of the story like Micheal does in the bedroom. Great job, please keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Great job with this part and with the rewrite. Now with the parts at good lengths, you are one of the better writers on here.

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