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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Great

Gotta have to get myself some new poker buddies

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Great story

Would of liked to see it continued instead of ending so abruptly..... not that you can't continue it ;)

MaryAnn678MaryAnn678over 10 years ago
Wetness

Perhaps, just once, someone will write a piece of erotica without including how one woman looks at any man and immediately feels wetness in her crotch. Believe me, we aren;t that passionate.

joycerfjoycerfover 10 years ago
poker prize

not quite like my first game of strip poker. This story is a bit fanciful...have you based this on reality or what you think it is???

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
GOOD EFFORT - A LITTLE MORE CARE WILL ADD SO MUCH!!

With on hand on (ONE)

those who are hear (HERE)

what was in that drink to having her thinking (CLUMSY WRITING)

tongue fishing it's way (ITS)

started to shake of Fiona's face (ON)

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