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Just wanted to let You know, i really enjoyed this one. Thank You so much.

twi

it's sexy but the end was totally unrealistic... getting married?!? good grief...

This was a very good story, up until the end. I believe you rushed it, unlike some of your other stories this one felt more like you wanted to get it over with, rather then to enjoy it and make it last. It was hot, well done, but the ending needs some work.

This story made me feel like I fell asleep and was having one of my favorite dreams. Thanks for sharing it. God bless have a terrific day.

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