All Comments on 'Stripping To Pay The Mortgage'

The end was far too rushed. Almost like notes for a story. How did she feel as she was banged at the rugby club? She tells her husband that she's become a prostitute and it's covered in a couple of sentences?!!

The idea is well worth more work and, judging by the first lesbian scene, the author is fully capable of it

When you write a story and make your lead characters dumber than stumps, your entire story becomes implausible and as dumb as the stumps you are writing about. Not good story telling.

excellent

Thanks for a great story cant wait for part 2

This had the perfect ending...so why part 2? Her husband was home again...Will he accept to be her pimp? Stay at home and let her whore herself for money? Is that the enormous love they had for each other? 1st time was an emergency...she was near a precipice, but now that isn't the situation...3* for this part...I hope the writer doesn't ruin the story

All we needed was a double ended dido to expand the sex show, bring on part two

Great story with great sex!!!!

Good story, a bit rushed at the end, but part 2 can show us what a whore she has become !

a rare one that sounds real, makes me wish to be there and reads very well

More please - I just LOVE loving wives like Caroline

Oh that was great x x x Loved reading it and re living my stripping experiences as i read it...Such a turn on and so well paced and wriiten. 5 stars from me and into my faves LOL x

Great, can't wait for part 2. Hoping that our protagonist becomes more and more turned on by the slut that she becomes, that she starts to really enjoy and look forward to the blue stag shows, and relishes the power as audiences are transfixed by her brazen sexuality.

You stopped writing

Can't strip without screwing everyone? Maybe a truncheon along side your head will knock some sense into you.

Stripping doesn't mean she needs to be a complete whore.

Seven years later, wonder what happened to part two