All Comments on 'Stuck'

Loved it.. Please do continue this story line.

This is the first story I've read by you, but will be checking out the rest of your stories.

Have to pull up your page and bookmark it now..

Thank You

Some practically perfect prose...parlayed into the twist at the end...please continue!

Story liked the way you sucked everyone in and then brought out the truth. it will be interesting to hear the rest of the Story about the Family and her Parentage.

I thought it was excellent, and was well on my way to Favoriting it.

And then the last scene happened, and ruined it for me.

I really liked the overall gist of your story, but the grammatical issues were really distracting.

I was originally thinking this story was a little silly, but once I got to the twist at the end it changed from silly to really interesting. I am looking forward to reading more about these characters!

Good story right up until she lost her legs. Wtf? What a downer.

That last scene dammit. You kill libido's just as quickly as you raise them. Admirable story telling skills though.. i like. Personally disregarding that last part for my enjoyment's sake.

Great love story. Wish they happened to me

This story need more chapters keep up the good work

It was awesome. Beautiful description and wonderful job at storytelling.

Awee, this actually really got to me. I loved every second of it, both Art and Nicola feel like such fleshed out characters, so full of life!

Ok, wow, it's been WAY too long since I did anything with this story. In the time since I wrote this I've finally been able to get a job, a job that leaves me absolutely exhausted by the end of the day but a job none the less. Which means that between that and some other personal hobbies I've not had a chance to properly sit down and write the next chapter out. Plus I took a good few months off to get something for the 2016 Winter Holidays contest and couldn't even finish that.

The 2nd Stuck chapter is coming, it's a lot longer cause I'm covering a good chunk of their lives leading up to Nicola losing her legs as well as leaving crumbs for future storylines, but it'll be out before the end of the year... I hope.

just great

This was a short well written little story that expresses love over sex and I enjoyed the characters you created. I wish you would continue their story, maybe having kids and sex with her being disabled not for the fetish of it but as a challenge to test your skills. Plus I would like to read more of these characters. I enjoyed Nicola' s the best.

Really nice twist at the end. Makes one think how lucky we are. Five Stars!

I enjoyed the whole story

Then the end, made me shed 2 tears

Didn’t see that coming

If I could curse in a comment, I would

Thanks for the ride

A touching story...looking for more of these two!

I like this. It was original, fun and touching all at the same time.

It's funny, you pointing out that she's "a lot" older and is taking place in 2023 and I found and greatly enjoyed it in 2023. Good story, I like a good, little romantic short now and again. 5/5