by TheNewcomer
Really liking how the story is progressing so far. The only suggestion I have for now? At the end of the chapters, include the English translations of all the Spanish, because having to Google Translate everything every couple of paragraphs just completely takes you out of the immersion
I will check into this. I tried to write it with the following action or dialogue hinting at what she said to keep the story moving but trial and error. Thanks.
That was an extremely hot chapter. I have adored this series so far.