All Comments on 'Stud? Who, Me?'

by dispatchprime

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mentalmanmentalmanover 12 years ago
Great start!

If you consider this to be "incoherent", then I can't wait to read your more polished work. ;-) Loved it - dirty talk turns me on and you handled it well. Also loved the cardigan-wearing cougar-in-heat. Yowsa!

More please!

RePhilRePhilover 12 years ago
BRILLIANT!

Great writing give us another one please

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great debut!

Love that hot steamy dialogue! Excellent writing.

jimh67jimh67over 12 years ago
Keep writing

I'm not a huge consumer of mature stories, but the setup here was new to me. I liked his hesitancy and insecurities at the start. I'd definitely read more of your work.

oldtwitoldtwitover 6 years ago
loved it

Loved this,so fast and old fashioned dirty and sexy

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