by NPC01
I absolutely LOVE the extra layers you are adding onto these characters. It makes the entire story that much sexier and enjoyable. Please keep writing!
One can really believe that Erica exists. Anyone would lose their mind and really hurt the one they love if they thought they were being betrayed. The characterisations throughout this storyline have been wonderfully consistant.
This author has conveyed playfulness, love and anger to just the right degree to make us, the reader, belive in these characters.
I hope are going to be many more chapters about these wonderful people.