by AnnasFriend
I don’t see why you’re not happy with it. This was amazing.
Really well written. Sexy, great details, personality-centric. There aren't any true conflicts per se, as you did between Martin and Maggie in the first chapter, but plot and character development was good. Oh, and it was sexy as all get out. Keep on writing!
Five stars! I loved it, but please don't take this into the incest category.
Truly superb writing. Only thing wrong: you left us hanging. What happens next? Liz seems in love with him, and Martin with her. Sure, there is the issue of age, but ...
Well Done, will read all your work
Thanks
I know what it's like with heavy seasonal workloads, but when's Chapter 4 coming out?? The wait is excruciating!
I do plan to return to Maggie and Liz (and Charlie, perhaps?) as soon as I can... I can only plead pressure of work. Blame GDPR and IFRS 16.
(Jonny - you went over 4 YEARS between instalments according to your bio. Surely you could cut me a little slack?!)
You possess the unique ability to make it seem as though I am watching the events unfold live in front of me, instead of reading a story. That is a unique and special gift. Hopefully the words flow as easily from you to the page as they do from the page to your readers. If so, I can see you making some serious coin in a sideline business selling erotica on Amazon. On a more selfish note, I can’t wait for you to wrap up this series and write many, many more.
This is one of the best series on the site. It’s been a long time, but would love to see it continue!
Great storyline and I’m totally addicted. I need to know about Charlie now !!!! I’m thinking at least the 3 girls have been together and hopefully she will make things a foursome.
Brilliant story as always and now I really, really wanna know about Charlie. 5 stars
Shouldn't this have had at least on more Chapter, if not more, by now?
Three year hiatus is far too long!!
You cannot be serious??? Leaving us all hanging like that??? Get typing, man, FFS!
That was the hottest threesome I’ve EVER read here.
EVER!
Please finish it someday.
Yes, yes...YYYEEESSSSSS!!!! That, as one of the other readers said, was the hottest threesome ever...
Then, THEN, Maggie brings up Charlie!! And insinuates that Charlie wants to be involved/that they should bring her into the "fold"!!
So, why, OH WHY, IS THERE NO 4TH CHAPTER TO THIS SERIES??!! This deserves a follow-up...sssooo....????
FIVE STARS...ABSOLUTELY!! A CONSTELLATION OF STARS!!
This story is absolutely crying out for at least one more chapter hat could sit either in this category or incest/taboo
Perfectly written threesome. I would love one final chapter to finish the story!
Excellent story that really works for me. I'd love to see more chapters, but it looks a lot more like a finished story without the dangling plot arc from the former chapter 4. Perhaps one day, if we can't have the full story as it might have been envisaged, the writer will be able to rework the additional content into something with fewer loose ends?
Disappointed I can't watch their further relationship. I wonder what women think of this threesome, the age difference for one. I for one love this. Martin is making mankind look good.
So I will have to read another of your adventures, you do have an active mind
Oooohhhh....kay...just finished reading this for the second time....last time a little over a year ago...
Again...WHERE IS/ARE THE NEXT CHAPTER(S)????!!!! YOU cannot leave this like this...or have you written a different series, which is bringing daughter Charlie into this group/harem??!! Because, THIS IS UNACCEPTABLE!! AND CRUEL BEYOND ANY STRETCH OF THE IMAGINATION!!!!!
Still, Five**5**🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩💫💫💫💫💫
And, PLEASE WRITE A FOLLOW-UP!!!!!
What they said. Where's the next bit?
This btw is the main reason I like SOL ... if a good story is incomplete, I bookmark it and read it when it's done, all is well.