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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
wow

i came twice reading that !

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
great idea, but...

The idea is very clear and very hot, but the story's kind of unpolished. The phraseology is often awkward, and misspellings and other little technical things distract and detract from the flow of the story. You might want to get an editor to help you fix that stuff so that a good story can be truly amazing. That said, this is definitely hot - had me cumming even before the end!

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