All Comments on 'Studying Abroad Ch. 01'

Wow. So I never actually comment just vote. But this one I absolutely had to say awesome job, and if you leave it orphaned I am so nominating it to "the finisher" 'cause I have to see what happens next!

One error Nevada is behind London. 7AM GMT is closer to Midnight Nevada time. Other than that a great start to a story. I am not so patiently waiting for the next chapter.

surprised at the other comments honestly. found the mistakes make it difficult to read and enjoy quite honestly. I'm guessing English isn't your first language as the wording is a bit odd at times. Worst thing for me though are the mistakes like Invicta in some places, invista in others.. and he put someone is a comma? um is that like putting someone in a semi-colon? Or maybe more like an exclamation point? Spell-check without paying attention to the words is no good for anyone.

Great start.

I think, like others have said, that this is a great start to what is hopefully a lengthy series. I have to agree somewhat with one poster who suggested better spell-check, continuity-check, comma/coma, and whatnot. Maybe, you should consider an editor... those sorts of errors were really apparent early in the chapter but less so as the story progressed...

Looking forward to more chapters; thanks for sharing this story!

It just got started and then it stopped.