All Comments on 'Studying with Kelly: Pt. 01 The Assignment'

I enjoyed the story, but it's hard to read with all of the grammatical and spelling errors. Take some time ti reread your work or get an editor. Thanks

I agree on the editing -- I almost stopped reading because of the errors in spelling or wrong word choices, run on sentences, etc.... Please have someone who will give it a close reading give you editing feedback.

I agree with both of you on the editing. Next time let someone check over before posting, other than that I am looking forward to your next story.

Thank you for the feedback I am currently looking into getting an editor. Thank you for pointing me in the right direction as I hope to give you an even better story in the future!

Aside from the editing issues, it's a great start. keep writing!

It's a nice story but it is incomplete. You need to finish it soon as it's been 3 months (almost) since the first part came out. You have not completed this story but you came out with another one. Complete the story please.

i loved it reminded me of my high school days, i have always been a cocksuckerlike kelly, yum yum so good , cnnot wait to read more

is this a true story, sure could be

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