by AnyaMerchant
This was best love story I've ever read on here. Everything was perfect. No fake description of body parts or action.
Please continue with this storyline and new ones.
I love stories in this genre that explore the mental side of things when characters commit this taboo. The guilt, the thrill, the lust specifically caused by doing what society condemns.
I hope there is a part 2 where they sneak around behind dad's back, adding a further layer of taboo.
Brilliant story, very hot'n'sexy. I liked this a lot, hope there's a second chapter to follow.
Can't believe this is your first story .It's one of the hottest I have seen on here in some time. Loved it from beginning to end .5 STAR . Hope you do more with it . Thank you for the story and Please Do Chapter 2 !!!!
I like your writing but there's not even a explanation to why she's trying to get her son to fuck her. No back story no real build up just her throwing herself at him and to me and any sensible person you don't just fuck you mom or something just because *** for the effort.
and as one of the other commentators said, I can't believe this is your first submission. Well done.
Regarding having to explain the mother's motivations, though it would make a good second chapter (would be interested to know what they are), I don't feel it is really necessary for this one.
I hope you write again.
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A little fast, and not much back story, but hey a first try and pretty good at that. Your first few paragraphs hint at other stories to be told. Go for it.
Great story. Well written in all ways. Very erotic and kept the suspense (and the erections) up. You have a fantastic tumblr site too. Are any of those pics of you? Great job all around.
Nice build-up and pacing. Other posters make a good point regarding the mom's motivation. Other than having the hots for her own son, maybe there isn't any, nor does there have to be.
I do hope there's more. It's got the makings of a series.
It was erotic. But tapered at the end to just a mother son relationship, as if they didn't just have sex. Anticlimactic. Without change in their usual relationship.
Not so much a letdown, more like, oh well that was unusual.
In short, we need more development for these two.
For a while on this site, taboo stories have gone bland but yours was a refreshing erection maker. Thanks for the work - did I hear a little of real life in the story?
very erotic tale, agree with other commenters about the lack of moms thoughts about screwing her son. A very good start and hope you have more of this story for us.
For first story, it was well written. Hope to read more of your writings. Thanks
5 stars !! Yes, a story that's arousing and just plain HOT ! His Mom is just plain horny and wants her son to screw her and be sexually playful. She has been dropping hints and enticing him in the way she dresses skimpy and touches his leg, thigh, and cock plus shows off her body etc. I think now that they have awkwardly had sex; since they are snowed in he and his Mom should go to bed, make out and screw each other slowly until it gets so intense they body cum hard. He wants him and is going to have him so he should just arouse her so much that she will cum buckets and enjoy it. Yes, please write another chapter or two ASAP. Thank you.
That was simply amazing.
It was hot and had a lot of teasing and it had a major climax.
Certainly one of the most erotic and sexy stories I have read on here in ages.
With your talents please write more stories soon.
very, very nice. I agree w/ all the positive comments. Bravo! and Encore!
You know, the ones where a mother is being overtly sexual toward her son with zero in the way of motivation, and the befuddled dipshit can't grasp what's going on despite all lack of subtlety on her part.
A very creative story well written. I look forward to seeing more from you.
The mother wanted sex to compliment the love she felt for her son. He was a horny man who wanted to love his mother but was afraid she did not see him as a man. Now they can explore sex the same as any couple would, kinky or vanilla.
Very creative and different. I'm a big fan of the build up of tension before sex. You captured that quite well. I hope to see more from you.
***** Great build up, reluctance and anticipation of something to happen. Nicely woven story. Will there be another chapter or two??? I hope so.......
Nothing like a sweet, beautiful Mom who takes good care of her son's needs.
I liked the plot, and the concept of a petite, sexually charged mother who wants to fuck her son. It was well written, and grammar was good. I hope to see more of your work here.
Do it again. More stories or even a continuation of this one. Thanx.
You definitely have a talent for erotic writing based on this story, which was sexy & arousing. I hope you will continue Emily & Justin's adventures as there seems plenty of scope for plot & character development. Or regale us with other tales - just please keep sharing the fruits of your imagination.
Yes she does
Every step, touch, hug, and smile,
She knows exactly what she's doing
The mother, taking her time, confident in success and her appeal, was wonderfully told.
Really pulled me into your story. great writing! Very sexy... :)
Well written and entertaining with a logical progression.
I love how hard he fought it with logic and denial. I love that she didn't stop being a source of comfort even during the foreplay. Im soaked
Why the fuck are they at home while dad's on vacation and so are the 2 daughters? Why's the mom straight up saying fuck me with no reason given its just she's a cheating slut.
What ever your doing now.....stop ! You should be writing more great stories like this one. Many thanks for you work.
Excellent story!!!! I like the stories where mothers take the initiative and seduce her son. Great, need more like this.
It seemed to me like the story was hard to follow sometimes.
It was like here, there, over....OH¡¿ there too
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Another great story . You have the balance just right . It even seems believable to me. You must start writing again you have a gift . I cannot wait for your next adventure ... part two to this or one of your other storys or even a new story. I look forward to reading more