All Comments on 'Sturgis'

Though it was nearly unreadable. Punctuation was horrible. Spelling nearly as bad. "Hold up in someone's house."? Who got robbed? I think you meant holed up. But even so, that suggests you go there to hide, not as a base for a party. And getting a blow job while riding? I think her shifting around and the weight imbalance would be enough to make a red smear on the asphalt, not to mention her proximity to the air-cooled engine.

Well, that's okay. I had been thinking of the story for a lomg time, bit the bullet, and decided to write it. Not everything I write is awesome, the shit is trial&error, and I wrote it the best I could.