by BB47
So good. I'm quite interested in this story, more so than most on this site. Can't wait for your next chapter. Keep it up.
Cale
Nicely done, great descriptions and understanding/execution of inner monologue
I always feel a little sad when I find a really good story on this site that wasn't continued. This is one of them. Should you, BB47, ever find your way back here, I would really love to see this series continued.
Great story so far. Please continue, i would like to see how this plays out in the end