by Ashson
the name "Li" is not Japanese ... it is Chinese ... Japanese does not have an "L" in the language at all
Can you edit your story and change her name to ANYTHING Japanese? At this point I'd almost be happy to see her called Kawasaki or Honda or even Ginsu. :-(
Change from your usual stories, aside from the wrong name it was a very good story.
Nice, work coach. Did you lock the door ? Are you sure she was asleep ? She sleep thru the scream.