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by DieterSchaumer

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TatasForNowTatasForNowover 1 year ago

typos:

"even though its Aspyr-Architecture whose illegally modifying contracts"

"whose" should be "who's" I think

Also:

"Nothing. Its just here I am, staring at someone whose literally saving the world, while I complain about bureaucrats."

Same issue. Whose instead of who's.

Also, good work on the story.

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