All Comments on 'Submission'

by Grise_Claire

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Last chapter?

Didn't come soon enough

FromSunFromSunover 16 years ago
Too Abrupt

Beautifully sensual stories, but each - especially this last - ends far too abruptly.

DryhillDryhillalmost 14 years ago
MORE PLEASE

Surely they are going to become 24/7 slave/Mistress. So there is plenty to write about.

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