All Comments on 'Submission: An Initiation'

Hope it's autobiographical you lucky sod

Loved it. Please do more, perhaps a follow up with her.

I thought the story was really well written and the descriptive writing great. It didn't 'turn me on' (I guess I don't share the author's kinks) but I still enjoyed it. I have only just started writing stories for the site and you do can some negative comments from 'Anonymous' please ignore them. I look forward to reading more.

Loved it, very hot!

"non fiction"? Dude... :)

Very well written indeed. I'm impressed by the vivid description of the woman and love the bit of humor. Should you want to turn this into a full book make sure to add more drama between the characters. Intrigue by the end, however, it is a bit too personal. Reading it out of the perspective of the male is refreshing. Good luck.

Amazing how often I come back to this…

-V (SW) x