All Comments on 'Submission Ch. 02'

Really enjoying the setup. I enjoy the longer stories that don't have sex in every x

Chapter. Please keep writing about Tracy's adventures.

A strong continuation. I could feel more emotion from Tracy this chapter. I like the pace of the build up and the tease it provides. You've hinted at master having a bit of sadist in him. I hope you don't over play that part of him as you've also shown him to have other personality traits. The same does for Tracy and humiliation. Don't let it take over and lose all else.

I'm all in with this story and I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm not into trans characters but I do find Tracy quite interesting and can't wait to see how her story will go. Keep writing and I will keeping reading. Thank you.