All Comments on 'Submission in the Sun and Sand Ch. 01-02'

I loved it! Made my own panties sopping wet, too!

Loved your story. Thank you for it.

I love the feeling of leather around my neck. Can't wait for the next parts :D

to what looks like a very good story line!

I too, love the feel of the leather around my neck and the weight of the leash. Please give us more of this torrid tale.

Great start to what should be a long story..Hope for nipple torture and spanking..Love the ass licking

You should continue the story without a doubt!

soppingwetpanties you bad girl! I think you need a spanking after writing such a naughty story! Don't let that stop you writing more though ;)

Being called a naughty girl is a high compliment indeed. Is that not the point of these stories?

More chapters of Carrie's submission will be forthcoming as Carrie shares her darkest secrets with me.

I can identify with Carrie a lot. Here here to calls for more, looking forward to seeing what's in store for Carrie.....

I'm late to the party, my invitation comes from the pages of Literotica "(!)"

I'm going to enjoy watching these two become untangled to each other. If Carrie wants to be submissive perhaps Amanda can have entertain some of her friends. Don't denie her orgasms, I think women love having them ripped from their body. I have had a young woman ride my leg before instead of the fucking I expected, it was strangle satisfying for one she told me I ruined her panties, two she was late to be home, Mom was waiting, giving that I was 19 and well less than a gentleman.