All Comments on 'Submission on the Subway'

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oldwinooldwinoover 16 years ago
Hot Novel Story

Hope tis is just the begging of a long series. What will he teach her?

Maitre1962Maitre1962over 16 years ago
Submission on the Subway

Excellent start to a story! :) I hope,you have a few more chapters planned! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
A bit confusing and immature.

To young to drink but full of drugs I assume.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This has a lot of potential to be an outstanding story. It’s a bit disjointed in places; I’ve no idea where an operating theatre comes into the story?

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