by hasnoalias
The EE tits didn't bother me. Hell, my wife has bigger tits than those. However, seeing the word "Mom" at the end of nearly every sentence got to be tiresome after awhile. Four stars.
Story was super hot but I could have done without the paragraph of questions he had every 30 seconds. Maybe one question? WAY too many questions. Mix one or two in....
I disagree- the questions he`s asking her make this- and her- super hot. Keep going, please.
Good story and a good mom! Like some have already said, there were too many moms after each question, and too many questions throughout. Having said that, I liked the fact that they were fucking a lot. So many stories have all this buildup, then hardly fuck before the story is over! I just wish mom would have been vocal with some "Oh honey, oh God, oh baby, oh yes," thrown in. It would still keep her submissive. 4 Stars
Good formulation of the story. But far too many questions and repeated “mom”. It became tiresome long before it stopped.
I love this story
It is only too often that he asks many questions and answers them all simply with yes. She doesn't say much except: Yes, yes son, yes, yes my son, yes, yes, yes...
the conversations are boring, there is a better way.
EXCELLENT,
Congratulations on a beautifully prepared and written work, I understand the questions that were being asked and repeated, that is a way of encouraging the submissive to accept their place, but not every question had to be qualified by prefixing or suffixing with,mom, that was tedious and made the reading experience much poorer.
Lmao I get where killerbeeez is coming from, I feel like the son would fuck a clone of himself if he could lol
I agree with everyone else it should have ended after page 2, went on way to long same words over and over, they should have added another girl in it to spice it up after part 2 to save this, 3 stars
Yes, it is a bit repetitive, but an excellent mom/son story, nevertheless. Thank you for a great read. IMHO, well worth all five stars, more if they were available.
Good story. However there were too many questions at a time and overall.