All Comments on 'Submitting to Him'

I think the story was good overall, and hope there are more for a series.

Don't give up your day job.

Excellent writing.

I don't think she deserved the cane at the end, it seems a tad on the excessive side, and being punished for being online and talking to her friends seems a touch too controlling, as everyone, even subs deserve to have friends and not be isolated from the world...but the story itself was actually pretty darn amazing. Julia was adorable and her willingness to accept everything dished out to be a good sub and make him proud of her was extremely endearing. I loved how he took care of her afterwards, at least he realizes aftercare is important..but I do think he should be kinder.