All Comments on 'Substitute'

Exciting and well written. Have to say I enjoyed the twist at the end.

That was simply amazing. Totally agree with the first comment. The ending was perfect. This may just be my most favourite story you've done. Brilliant xxx

I have to agree. The sex was very hot, the build up was great, and it was wonderful that the narrator claimed what he wanted at the end. Well done, not a misstep.

Great story and I loved the ending.

I feel sorry for the roomie at first.... He pines away for hunky Cliff, who is out there fucking and sucking anything in jeans with a cock.... Not a bad life for Cliff....

I both enjoyed and hated the ending.... while I liked that he could go off on his own, looking for and prowling for rough trade, I also missed the semi-obvious happy ending of Cliff finally realizing he wants his roomie and gives him what he's so been longing for all this time.... Sigh....

Excellent job, though...

Very hot and well written. A winning combination. I loved it!

This turns me on and had me amazed with how hard I was. Think about doing a follow up.(;

I loved how rough horse was then he acted soft when he learned that the guy was a virgin and then went back to being rough and then fucked the passed out cliff ;) yumm. I also gotta say Cliff had it coming to him in the end when the guy walked out saying he had a date, he waited long enough for cliff and horse is much more of a man

as always you write with passion! love your stories.