All Comments on 'Substitute for Dad Ch. 02'

I hope he ends up with both mom & sister, but of course I would prefer it was mom though, and would be her new husband.

I really do not people who leave negative comments on people's hard work.... ...this might be a good story but I never got half way through the first page.... Absolutely boating....... You wrote nothing to get my attention and draw me in

you have one more sister to go. I can see part three coming.

Bloody amazing story, so good! This isn't the usual son fucks his Mum type of rubbish that's normally presented here - this is a quality story. Plenty of background information, a full picture is painted, no detail is left out. I really enjoyed this - excellent!

In additions to a brilliant story you managed to insert almost every known colloquial phrase and term. I hope it was in response to the Anon who complained after Ch. 01 that you used British rather than American English. If they read this chapter it would give them a right proper wind up.

Again, thanks for the story.

sorry for the misspelling of your user name.

A really erotic story.

I too think he needs to fuck his other sister.

Perhaps make mum pregnant while you're at it.

Thanks for the good read

It was a well written story as a whole you left open for another chapter you should really think about writing a third chapter to finish it off but regardless of what others might think if you do write another chapter I advise you not to bring in the other sisters I really think you would mess it up if you do cause he is going to have a hard time keeping up with both his mother and younger sister especially when his younger sister has had sex only one time so chances are she is going to be really needy and well we all know the mother is considering she fucked him again without asking her husband/his father permission this time around so she was willing to cheat on him just to fuck her son again so that alone says she is going to be needy but again it was well written story can't wait for you to write another chapter if you do either way keep up the good work with your future stories

This is one of the best I have read in a very long time. There is thought behind it, and not just "son gets his rocks off again" stuff. I really hope there is more chapters to come. Not sure about including any other family than you have already. But seriously, wow, erotic and engrossing, A better read than 50 shades.

I love the subtitle, "Resuming my duty to keep Mum satisfied." We know that lots and lots of boys, plenty more than a scared society cares to know about, get hard around their own mother and have the urge to just go and shove their big hard on up between their mother's thighs, up into the same cunt they came out of. What this subtitle stresses the other side of the coin, I would say the most important side. A mother who let's say is in her middle or late 40s, maybe early 50s, is very apt to have unmet needs between her legs. Hubby's not around, divorce or whatever, or just falling down on the job, old age, poor health. That's when it becomes not just the pleasure but the duty of the big strong strapping son of the family to step in and do his duty. Pump away like a trooper at that hairy hole mom's got down there, give her some well-deserved convulsive cums, and blow his balls up inside her, flooding her babyhole with the creamy semen she craves. Look, mom's given her boy so much all of his life. The least he can do is give her big twatfuls of his semen in return.

Thanks for a fun series to read.

This is one of the best stories this author has written. Finally, mother and son can be honest with each other. As for the husband/father, I imagine it is hard to accept the fact he can never fully sexually satisfy a woman again. His ego, sense of self and self-image must be completely destroyed. Hopefully he is mature enough to accept his failure and permit his wife to continue to have a complete life, to include love and sex. This story cotinues its 5 star rating.