All Comments on 'Substitute Seduction'

Good work, Miss Kay. I bet you're just as good in person ;-)

Excellent work, most erotic and well written especially for your first piece. Please continue the story, my g/f and I enjoyed it tremendously. Congrats

great premise, very sweet. but let your inhibitions go.. flesh the story out some, use more vivid detail. for instance, you started with gina being in the teacher's control, or spell.. run with that. Also, Gina's first time and control.. tease the girl, make her very hot, wanting, begging. you may think of a follow up story.. another detention, or dinner later, that sort of thing. all in all, nice piece, you can tell it was written by a sweet girl who also wants to shed inhibitions. collaborate, my username is an aol name

Great story all we need now is a nun

would like to see this chapter fleshed out some and a chapter 2 added -- good stuff

You can't stop now. Come on girl you have a talent, use it!