All Comments on 'Suburbia Ch. 01'

cant wait to hear more stories

Should be in inter racial. Then I would not read this crap and vote it a big fat zer0!

Very well written and Hot. Please do more.

"Yup" get a grip and join this generation. There's no Black & White anymore, just people and no, I'm not black!

This story definitely needs a continuation. If it is not made by you, perhaps I will change some names and add onto it myself. It's plot is outstanding not only from a racial standpoint but one from a common sensed one as well. The woman needs to be given the same privileges as the man has beeen experiencing and if she should happen to get preggie by her lover then let the husband have to pay the extra child support, too, as he has been fucking around on her and Lord only knows how many additional babies he has created with other women. I loved this story....and this is the way that marital lives should be.

Having one (or perhaps more) of the women on the block turn up pregnant would certainly be an interesting angle, but for now, though, the whole thing is being kept under wraps, certainly not an easy thing. In fact, in Chapter 2 the secret actually does come out, but I'm not going to ruin the who, how, or what happens here. LOL

...what about Natalie? She is basically forgotten. Did she agree to Marcus having an affair or did he cheat on her? I don't know yet, so it is hard for me to completely approve of this story without knowing.

Marcus and Natalie's background is going to come into focus as the story progresses, so you can't really know what their situation is just from the first chapter. As Marcus interacts with the people of Suburbia, more and more of his story the reader learns. In other words, read more, know more.

Nice job on the story author - perceptive - nice depth of characters and twist on black on white screwing - painted landscape of story understood quite well - less understanding is reader comment about black not being a story issue - get real - erotic minds love black on white - its perverted by author intention - and as another reader spoke of - as central figure is black and sex "may" be regularly involved it does belong elsewhere even as well as it is written. Especially when author hints? black babies will soon reach the sky volumewise - it needs to be under interracial so as not to offend or surprise people - agree author person??? Regards -

That's the second such comment I've gotten so far... I think I will try and get the story switched into the Interracial category.

Interracial, but gentlemanly, mannerly. Very well done. Looking to read more.

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