All Comments on 'Subversive Materials'

by ImperatorMentus

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
proofreading

Excellent story, but I did notice that you used the word 'epitaph' when I believe you meant to write 'epithet'.

WhackdoodleWhackdoodleover 7 years ago
Not a bad story, better than most MC stories.

After all, most don't come with an opportunity for redemption.

Truthfully though, the whole genre is...overdone. While I can accept that a limited number of people are evil and many have the capacity for cruelty when coerced; but there are many who are decent. But in 99.99999% of MC stories, every man is a wannabe rapist who indulge cruelty and humiliation without regard for the cost on both the victim and the aggressor.

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