All Comments on 'Subway'

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curiositykittencuriositykittenabout 17 years ago
Really HOT! Great Story!

Love the details - the way you build the excitement in this story! Makes the reader want more! Hope to see more mystery encounters!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Fantastic

Fantastically written; that was very hot, and very real feeling. It's hard to really capture that "lost in lust" feeling, but you certainly did it. Looking forward to more in the future!

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