All Comments on 'Success Has It Own Price'

I didn't even finish the first page because the grammar was so terrible I couldn't read it. Please proofread next time!

.... The quality of the English with many misspelt and incorrect words made it impossible to read.

I take it English isn't your first language. Yes, there are some misspelled words, and some confusing sentences but otherwise the story is good. Maybe a spell check app and a little more familiarity with English...hell even Americans and the British speak somewhat different English. I encourage you to keep writing !

Couldn't get past the first page. Take advantage of the free editors and resubmit it.

write more and frequently

and proofread sadhu ji

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Better write in your language instead of punishing the reader!

Needs corrections but still hot.