by pete1229
Well written start and am looking forward to the next installment. A little too short
I wonder what the effect of this will be. Did it turn him into major league sex machine? Or did it ruin him sexually until when/if he ever sees her again. I can't wait to find out.
Wondering how their next meet will be like. Longer story would be fantastic!
I enjoyed some of the story build up and was craving more of it prior to any of the "sexy times". Also on a personal preference level I kinda lost my interest when the term "goddess" was used, That is a powerful choice of words that kinda came out of the blue since there wasn't a build up for the main character to be so enthralled.