All Comments on 'Succubus Ch. 01'

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ArngrimArngrimabout 8 years ago
Nice start

Well written. Can't wait for more!

NATHANBRITTLESNATHANBRITTLESabout 8 years ago
Enjoyed the story

Well written start and am looking forward to the next installment. A little too short

dk519dk519about 8 years ago
Nice

I wonder what the effect of this will be. Did it turn him into major league sex machine? Or did it ruin him sexually until when/if he ever sees her again. I can't wait to find out.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
A sequel seems in its place

Wondering how their next meet will be like. Longer story would be fantastic!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
A start

I enjoyed some of the story build up and was craving more of it prior to any of the "sexy times". Also on a personal preference level I kinda lost my interest when the term "goddess" was used, That is a powerful choice of words that kinda came out of the blue since there wasn't a build up for the main character to be so enthralled.

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