All Comments on 'Succubus Ch. 02'

This is a nicely paced, albeit short chapter that keeps me looking for the next installment. I'm curious to see where you'll take it, and how the old man in the vitamin shop figures into this. Well done, so far!

Keep it up. I'm going to follow it all the way through.

So far I'm not sure it belongs in Horror, with him feeling what seems to be love from her.

Unless in later chapters it goes a different way.

Oh and needs more please.