by devinn
This is a really fun, hot and engaging tale.
My only complaint is that the plot is developing a bit slowly. Hard to complain much about this given how much I have enjoyed the delaying scenes. I would like to know what Miln and Arael are up to.
Definitely looking forward to more
Yes keep them coming and I would have preferred if the stories were a bit longer but I guess I feel that way as it is so good.
I very glad your developing this story. It went from a one off short story to something that is really starting to have potential.
While I normally don't like cliffhangers, this left something to look forward too.
I just hope we don't have to wait to long.
"A not very subtle hint."
"chuckles"
I glad to see the highly anticipated chapter 3 in this series.
Please don't stop. I'm greatly enjoying the story.
On a personal note I think there can never be to much plot.
It's been a long time coming, but this Chapter was well worth the wait
neat story-great sex-interesting idea thanks
Will we ever see Miln or Arael visit Scott again? Maybe he gets taken to their dimension and becomes a sex slave for them and other succubi....