All Comments on 'Succubus Ch. 03'

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ResidentWeavilResidentWeavilabout 11 years ago
Intriguing story

This is a really fun, hot and engaging tale.

My only complaint is that the plot is developing a bit slowly. Hard to complain much about this given how much I have enjoyed the delaying scenes. I would like to know what Miln and Arael are up to.

Definitely looking forward to more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Yes keep them coming and I would have preferred if the stories were a bit longer but I guess I feel that way as it is so good.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Coming along very nicely

I very glad your developing this story. It went from a one off short story to something that is really starting to have potential.

While I normally don't like cliffhangers, this left something to look forward too.

I just hope we don't have to wait to long.

"A not very subtle hint."

"chuckles"

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Chapter 3

I glad to see the highly anticipated chapter 3 in this series.

Please don't stop. I'm greatly enjoying the story.

On a personal note I think there can never be to much plot.

lemmethinklemmethinkabout 11 years ago
Welcome Back

It's been a long time coming, but this Chapter was well worth the wait

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Thanks

I really like this story, please continue!

greenhawk46greenhawk46over 10 years ago
interesting, strange and erotic

neat story-great sex-interesting idea thanks

Arronbird85Arronbird85about 8 years ago

Will we ever see Miln or Arael visit Scott again? Maybe he gets taken to their dimension and becomes a sex slave for them and other succubi....

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Again

Please continue your story,

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