All Comments on 'Succubus Chronicles 01 - Molly's Tale'

So far I have two more stories in this world in progress, I've got about as many words in "redneck sorcerer" as in Molly's tale, and "Making a god," is not nearly as far along. I suspect Redneck will ultimately be about twice as long as Molly, and Making will be about half as long, but you never know with stories...

I also have a lot of other stories that I'd like someone else to look over before submitting. So if anyone is willing to help, especially someone female so I can get some constructive criticism of my female characters' thoughts and actions, I'd really appreciate it!