All Comments on 'Succumb to the Temptation'

I liked the story.

Although, the wife’s fantasy. I would say fine just no other dicks.

There can only be one Highlander! And he doesn’t share.

Take another run through it and edit again. Then resubmit the story as the edited version. Once you submit it, it takes a week, but they put your edited version up.

I gave it a 4.

🤘Redo1984

spellcheck and edit your ramblings!!

Sorry that was too difficult to read all the way through. Potential for a good story is in there somewhere. Example to have a wondering eye is different from a wandering eye.