by Drmaxc
...is what this feels like to me. It was a different take on the tale at first but it seems as if your ideas are getting thinner on the ground. A good idea but being done to death; I shall stop reading here. Still gave it 4stars though.
I think your tales are very sweet not every story has to be pornographic, a little bit of romance never never goes amiss. I have a fairy in my garden we have had her for quite a while now, but she keeps falling over in the winds up here in the highlands I have had to repair her delicate wings a few times now I worry that one of these days they will be smashed beyond repair, for my fairy is an eight inch resin model given to my wife by a loved aunt nearly 30 years ago, she is carrying a basket of strawberries. Long live never never land. Even though it is peeing down at the moment.