All Comments on 'Sucking to save'

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gnfgnfalmost 20 years ago
No

comment necessary. Makes no sense.

George

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
NO

George is right no point

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
wtf?!

It's just...random!

ErotonautErotonautabout 17 years ago
Disjointed, pointless

The storyline is nonsensical. Protagonists - not characters, since there's no real attempt at characterisation - appear and disappear at random. Why would the gunman do this? Why is the other cheerleader involved? Why did you bother?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Oh man

Your stories are the greatest. Comedy gold every time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
what?

these criminal acts committed against others so easily and all these angry vindictive people

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Wait . . . This is it?

This is the worst example of 'deus ex machina' I've seen on this site. It's too bad because there seemed to be elements here that could have been part of a pretty good story. As it is I agree with the other readers--it makes no sense.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

all girls suck cock eventually

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