All Comments on 'Sudden Encounter'

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ZachDocEightZachDocEightalmost 6 years ago
This is great writing! Can we have more?

This story took me along for the ride. It built my emotions as he built her pleasure. Believe me when I tell you you took me to school and I hope to be a better lover from the lesson. More please soon!

Lonely_readerLonely_readeralmost 6 years ago
Very well writte

Although I must say the anal part was poorly inserted. First it was the absence of proper cleaning, which can be forgiven, even if it doesn't fit with the ever-the-planner character of Danny. Second, and most important, it was the ass-to-pussy play that really is unsanitary in the best conditions and disease-inducing at the worst, and it really was tone-deaf since the rest of the story was very well founded in terms of realism.

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