All Comments on 'Sudden Trouble'

Really? You think we're suckers for reading you? Why would you say something like that? This is pretty good and got better as it went along. Some odd things in the beginning but you have a voice, enough so that I stuck with you all the way to the end only to be called a "sucker."

You have to keep the story alive, you just have too

it was an endearment. don't be offended. *muwwwwwaaah* kisses.

I don't think that I wasted my time and it's a nice read. I hope you continue your story. I loved the way the son didn't took advantage of his drugged mom more like a lover who cares and not like a horn dog. I would really like to see the emotional bondings getting stronger between them, but it's your story and obviously it will take some of your time. But I have enjoyed it throughout. Thanks for sharing.

I'd love for you to continue this story, but regardless, please keep writing. I thoroughly enjoyed this story.

Keep it cummng.

SO WE KNOW THAT YOU'RE AN ASSHOLE.

ROSES ARE RED... VIOLETS ARE BLUE.

HERE'S MY APPRECIATION, YOUR FIVE STARS BECAME TWO.

AND GUESS WHAT, DUMMY. THE SUCKER IS YOU.

Roses are red,

This much is true,

But violets are purple,

Not fucking blue

I liked the story however you could have used an editor to clean up the story. I may read the continuation, if you decide to write it. I do hope you clean up the obvious mistakes. Perhaps if you read your own story, you could fix it yourself.

I loved the story and had a few laughs with words. I would like the second chapter please.

I loved it! Long but worthwhile. You just knew that she would fall for her son for you gave enough hints. She was not in love with her husband any more. But ... when she became honest as her son insisted she must be - she became "Liberated" as she said herself. I would love to read a follow up! You have writing talent and I do not see any mistakes as someone said here. Maybe I am naïve but I always go for and like a good yarn! Thanks for sharing!!! 5-Stars!!!!

Hey b4ngb4ng, thanks so much for writing and sharing this story. It’s an excellent one and probably the best I’ve read so far. Please continue writing and sharing it, you’re an awesome author. Please do not mind those morons saying bad about it as they are simply idiots who think with their dick/cunts only. 5 SHINING STARS for you!!!

I really loved the detail and the characters you have created in this story. Especially Finn. I wish you would continue it and only hope you will continue it.

Ps. Lovely poem you have left us. 😂

-L.K.

Beautiful

Still high in the ranks of the best written Mom-Son love stories out there.

More please.